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GRE is one of the popular standardized tests which is required for MS admission in abroad. Analytical Writing section is one of the sections in the Graduate Record Examination. The score of this section does not count in the final GRE score but it is important to perform well in this.
GRE Sample Essay 8

It is more harmful to compromise one's own beliefs than to adhere to them.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

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Response

Our thoughts and experiences shape our beliefs. Beliefs are at the core of our character as our actions stem from it. It nurtures with our ability to adhere and abide by it. Its foundation shakes when we compromise it.

During our course of life, we need to take decisions. The better, the best. Difficult decisions test the faith we have in our belief system. The lenses through which we see things differ from person to person. For example, one could be a supporter of right wing politics and believe in ideas such as protectionism, nativism, neo-nationalism, social stratification, etc. Due to their belief in these ideas, their leaning is towards right wing politics. There could be a person with an opposing point of view with liberal ideas such as globalisation, social-equality, secularisation, decentralisation, etc. Their leaning is rooted in their belief in these liberal ideas.

A right wing supporter living in a country where the incumbent government is leftist will test her belief system. She witnesses that the ideas which she supports are not being implemented; in fact the exact opposite of that is happening. Whether to remain quiet and endure the situation without doing anything about it or to support what you believe in is the ultimate question. 

In difficult situations, it is easier to make compromises- beliefs, liking, and choices. Although difficult, it is more harmful to compromise one’s own beliefs than to adhere to them. In the above said example, it could be harmful to lead protests against incumbent leftist government but it is more harmful to shun your belief system and live in a country which is far from what you expect and want it to be. 

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During the American Civil War (1861- 1865), the then American president Abraham Lincoln proposed and enforced liberal reforms in major parts of the South. Slavery was abolished and this had repercussions which transpired into a civil war. The prevailing system was turned around making people of the South insecure about their position in the social and political hierarchy by granting equal rights to black people. If it was not for the ethos and beliefs of Abraham Lincoln, such changes could not have been made which had lead towards creating a more egalitarian society in America. 

Speeches and success stories have one thing in common. They both emphasise on doing what one believes in. Not compromising your beliefs under pressure of society, peers, and family is difficult but adhering to them helps you lead a more contented life. It grants inner peace which is negligible as compared to the discomfort that might come from adhering to them. During times of distress, one could feel inclined towards taking the easier path and conform or crumble under pressure but a little courage can make all the difference. It is more harmful to compromise one’s own beliefs than to adhere to the.  Following your beliefs requires practice and courage.







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This article scores a 4.5 because:

The article presents a thoughtful analysis of the given argument with cogent reasons. The analysis is supported with relevant examples wherever needed, thus conveying the central idea effectively. The article does a satisfactory job of explaining the crux of the analysis. The article points out the bias in terms of employment, showing an in-depth understanding of the argument and issue at hand.

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Q:   How can I apply for GRE exam?
A:

To apply for ETS GRE exam in India, students have two options. (1) Online Process (2) Offline Process.

  • In Online GRE Application process- students need to visit the website of ETS to complete the application process.
  • For Offline GRE Registration- Candidates will have three options to complete the ETS GRE exam process; On Call, Via Mail or Via Fax. 

Choose the method suitable for you to apply for the Graduate Record Examination.

Q:   Can I take GRE test at home anytime?
A:

Yes, You Can take GRE at Home anytime suits you! ETS offers a convenient option that students can take Graduate Record Examination according to their schedule from comfort of your own home.

All you need to do is arrange all the hardware (Computer, speaker, camera and more) at your home. A human proctor will monitor your test through your computer's camera and microphone.

Q:   What is a high score in GRE Analytical Writing?
A:

A GRE Analytical Writing score of 4.5 or above (out of 6) is considered high. This shows your strong critical thinking and writing skills. A high score in the AWA section means you can present your views effectively.

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